On the day we got our netbooks I was so happy and surprised. It was a nice sunny day and there were many people showing up to our netbook launch. There were lovely decorations that my teacher and my classmates put up. I didn't expect a really wonderful,shiny,amazing netbook and it's all thanks to you and the teachers at school. The most I enjoyed was seeing everybody working on their netbooks.
At school I work a lot better now that we have a netbook. My hand isn’t tired like before when we had no netbook. The netbook has helped me a lot by making research on the net easier and there are lots of games that teach me more mathematics. There are also stories on Disney.com that I can read. There are spelling sites to practise our spelling on. The netbook is wonderful to work with, if you have a lot of work to do in school and homework out of school.
So thanks a lot Mum and Dad I really appreciate all that money that you spent on me and allowing me to have a netbook in school.
I love you Mum and Dad
Your Daughter
Melissa
6 comments:
Hi Melissa its Mum I got my eye on you.
Hi Melissa I like your letter to Nana and Koro I like the part you said my netbook is helping me a lot on research and work. do you like your netbook? from sister
Hi Melissa you have a lovely story. I like how you respect your mum. And I really want to see you make another story.
Hi Melissa, you have a great story about Happy and Surprised. I really loved it. I hope everyone loves it too. What is so interesting about your story?
Thanks Mum for reading my story, I was hoping you were going to read my story.
Thank you Mele and Tainah for reading my story, What I like about my story and the most interesting thing is how I have writ-in I really appreciate all that money that you spent on me and allowing me to have a netbook in school.
I love you Mum and Dad. Thanks again Mele and Tainah
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